Just starting this thread thinking is there someone who has similar thoughts????I know this thing I have written is crap but if anybody has same thoughts that I have, I would be able to think I m not only one to be the ordinary..;-)?
Anyways keep rocking people and have fun.

?Ordinary Man?
Screaming out of last day?s nightmares,
I am all awake.
There is a new day ahead.
But I am same old,
an ordinary man.
Trying to be different each day,
wishing to be unique.
Seeking for the exclusive place,
Longing to be at the top.
This is me,
chained in my illusive thoughts.
Confused, I asked my self
?Do I really like how things are??
No, I don?t.
I answer myself.
But yet again I am,
an ordinary man.
This is the way the life flows,
and I sail out once again,
to find myself,
to be myself.

good one nirman...

Thanks Ruina...post some if u have...i ll be waiting to read something from ur side...

Something in words that's always in minds. "The same old person." - sucks. I like this.

nirman bro, k ho yar timi ni yesto ramro lekhdo rahecha, u sud start posting more poems. Really loved it man!


This is me,
chained in my illusive thoughts.
Confused, I asked my self
?Do I really like how things are??
No, I don?t.
I answer myself.
But yet again I am,
an ordinary man.
This is the way the life flows,
and I sail out once again,
to find myself,
to be myself.

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Cocacola,fanta,pepsi,mirinda,sprite,7"up.. no no no no Thump's up. Ramro cha Nirman bro.

thnx ppl haaru..i really liked comment..ani jas sis..khoi mero mail ko reply....i thought u ll reply..:-(.....I feel soo lonely....aani u ppl aalso post some yaar...mero paania aru post garchhu ma chandai...

here is another one...posted before but posting again...:-)

"Life Line"

All u thought as stream of your life,
merge into mere line one day.
A line with illusive images,
A line with strange distant voices,
that hunts you and feels u as a culprit.
Hunting you with its furious eyes and fierce claws.
you run and tun and run to find,
find the lost meaning of life, and fail once again,
coz you are already traumatized in between the lines,
the line so called life...

Wahhhhhhh
Nirman, "Ordinary Man" is a very simple and well written.

Hahahaha nivan bro ko "SATAIL" malai ramro lagyo... Choru hai...
Cocacola,fanta,pepsi,mirinda,sprite,7"up, Thump's up ?? nono no no.. " MAZZA" ayo :)
Mazza aka mango cold drinks:)

Indisguise:)

P.S: Confuse bro, highlight kasari garne hola yeso hamlai pani bhanam na.. yaha nabhaye e-mail. Thanks.

Hey Nirman bro,
Did you read "Siddhartha" by Herman Hesse? Really makes you think about yourself and your life. However, I see my life as an ocean, or maybe something created with the maze of the lines that you mentioned. But it's in all directions. Trying to sort out the best one.
Good luck to you!!
And I would definitely love to read other's too. People, go ahead, Write.

hey sis,
u never gave that book to me to read..i asked for it though...now u r soo far..think i will have to buy it and read...:-)..anyways will look for it and will read it...u too write some and post sis..and other people post some too...