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| chanmati | Posted
on 23-Nov-03 06:08 PM
Hi young fellows, here i have posted One of the poems by my friend Uttam. I was wordless..I was just thinking DO THESE THING HAPPEN among us? You may read. chanmati. Bastabika-ta tito hunchha, bhana ani sunna maan nalage pani bhannu maan lagchha , sunauna, ani sunna maan lagchha. Je kura hunu naparne ho tehi bhai dinachha, kahile kahi jindagima. Yo KABITA-yathartha jeevan ko aak Namuna ho. Aak PREMI/PREMIKA ra SADAK-ma byapar(business) garne (cocotte) haru bichko yathartha chitran. Prem garera dhoka dine premi/premika bhanda, paisa liyera, pyas bujhaune, ( WOMEN OF THE STREET) ko maya-ma kunai KAPAT hundaina. Uni haru je bacha garchhan tyo sankoch bina dinchhan. BACHHA-TODNE premi-premika bhanda, SADAKE AAEEMAEE/PURUS,haru yes aartha-ma Biswas-sila hunchhan(trustworthy). Bastabikta tito hundo rahechha, aaja yo Kabita le CHOKHO-MAYA garchhu bhane BACHA garera Dhokha dine premi-premika lai PACHHARERA, ti KATHIT PREMI/PREMIKA lai tala pareko chha. Yo KABITA, mero affno kalpana(imagination) hoina, aak bastbik ghatana ho. Aak sathile, affno sathi lai gareko DHOKA ko satya katha. Aak premika le affno premilai diyeko dhoka. Kabita ka SABDHA(WORDS) haru affai bolchhaan, tyo bigat(past)( betrayal in love) aaja bhanda 2-3 barsa agadi ghateko satya ghatana. NOTE: CHANDANI-CHOWK refers to brothel. MA ANI BARTAMAN-MA BANCHEKO CHANDANI CHOWK Kaslai kina chokho mayako Aswashown(obligation) dinu maile Kina kasaibata chokho mayako aswason linu maile Ke thaha katti khera Pida ko Chatyang barsinchha. Mayako duniya pani dekhi sakeko chhu maile Prem-ko mala une(web) Dhago-ma, Mayalu haru Seriyeko bheti sakeko chhu maile. Kasailai sathi-nai kina banau Ma* 2, Tauko thokera Miteri nai kina lagau ma, Afnai Sathi-ko Premika chorne ‘Chutiya’ sathi pani bheti sakeko chhu maile Ani Premi ko Sathi sanga lusuk bhagne,Kayar Premika pani dekhi sakeko chhu maile Duniya-dari dekhi sakeko chhu maile*2, mayalu-ka nautanki natak heri sakeko chhu maile Aba Kina Kasai-bata chokho mayako Aswason liu maile? aba kasai sanga aankha judhayera Premika nai Kina banau maile?*2 ‘Bichhod’ antim Satya bujhi-bujhi, kina Prem-Milan ko natak garu ma ‘kasam todna ko lagi ho’ bhane premika-haru bheti sakeko chhu maile. Chokho mayako aasha-ma, jeevan kina prem-bhaya ma bitau Maile? Ma-ta Bartaman-ma bachna chahanchhu, ani ta Umliyeko yo Jawani, Pratek Sanjh “Chandani Chowk” ma bitauna thaleko chhu maile. Chandani Chowk-ma bastabikta chha, natak chaina*2 Satya bartaman chha, bhaya-ko bhabisya chaina Yesko prasta parichaya chha, dhoka-ko tras chaina Chandani chowk-ma premi chaina, premika chaina Chandani chowk-ma Mit chaina, sathi chaina Ani Chandani chowk-ma bigat chaina, bhabisya chaina. Bartaman-ma bachnu chha maile, Chandanai chowk-ma dhokha-ko bhabisya chiana Khalti-ma paisa bhaye-sama,ani yo umliyeko jawani napokhiye-sama chandani chowk mero hunchha, yaha prem-ka nautanki natak chiana. Ma-ta bartaman-ma bachnu-chha,*2 Bahiri duniya-sanga aba mayako natak garnu bhanda Kunai belma pani tuti jani Prem-Bhaya ko bato rojnu bhanda, Pratek-din bartaman-ma bachne chandani chowk ko bato rojeko chhu maile. Uttam Adhikary"Apahelit" Marquette University Milwaukee, WI babuuttam@yahoo.com |
| Bhunte | Posted
on 23-Nov-03 06:32 PM
Chanamati, at least try to understand Uttam..... |